All Comments on 'The Watcher'

cracking first story...very graphic, good tale, characters interesting...pleading for a sequel! Thankyou!

Good start, I like the possibilities you've left open for their relationship after they recognized each other -- a father turned on by watching his daughter get raped, and also that he watched and did nothing to help her. I do tire of the "victim ends up enjoying it" twist though. I hope you decide to continue the story.

Impressive!