The Way You Look Tonight Ch. 02

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MaxiMilf
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I won't tell you about our lovemaking during our brief honeymoon at the lake. To do so would cheapen that experience for me. It is sacred and will stay alive in my memory for the rest of my life. Suffice it to say that it was plentiful and intensely satisfying beyond anything I've done in my past. Sorry...You'll just have to use your imagination.

To be continued.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

[His cock was at least 8 inches long and very thick around.]

====> you realize that is solid pornstar size regardless of race. The average penis length is 5.1 to 5.5 inches across studied and all races. Whites of European descent are around 5.6 inches. Black of African descent are a bit over six inches. The standard deviations of penis length and girth are pretty small (about 0.78 inches for lenght). So a guy with a more than 8 inch dick (and she would know given her history) is something like 3-4 standard deviations above average. That makes him like top small fraction of a percent, like >99.5% percentile. Look at any penis calculator. Add to that what sounds like a fat prick (she again would know), and his volume is well over double an average penis. Why bring this up? Because in thr next chapter, she is forced into fucking a hung black guy while on cochise, who is apparently so enormous (the cliche LW trope sigh) that he gives her such a massive orgasm that her inner demonstrated comes out and she embraces her being whored out fully despite being a PhD chemist and married woman of many years with a loving husband and kids and a Senior VP of R&D. Uh huh. Let's get this clear the myth of the 12 Inc cock is just that, regardless of race, a myth. Technically thr world record is like 13.5 inches from some huge freak in Kazakhstan (see Guinnes book of world records) but he is a mutant. Don't believe me? Look at the odds of a 12 inch penis (without surgery or an implanted device, like Dick Rambone or even Lex Steele, who tops out at short of 10 inches). It is so.ething like 1 in 100 million for even black guys. What are the odds that thr guy Gus hooked her up with after 3 weeks to "break her" was the 1 in 100 million. Ok maybe he was 10 inches. That is like 1 in a million. Do you really think that an extra 2 inches is going to make her completely forget her husband and go full slut. Yeah yeah readers will say it was just the dick size and that the guy was gentle with her, but she was on cocaine and she had a survival mechanism based on the rapes by her uncle when a teenager, hence the massive orgasm. Ok fine. But why then is when she admits she felt she first cheated? Where is the guilt? She admits she no longer had any and has embraced her inner demons. Umm ok but the author put that Herr yo make it look like a massive ebony cock pushed her over into full whore. Again, assuming Gus found the 1 in a million guy (maybe 1 in 100,000 for a black guy, remember still like 4.5 standard deviations AND one-sided tail), does the extra 2 inches really matter that much? Doubtful her vagina can take more than 8 inches before hitting the cervix. Besides her husband has given her great sex and love and doubtful by her won admission, the black guy is not thicker than her husband regardless of length. Maybe some will say it is the cocaine and other that her mind fractured. Ok buy then why put in the cliche (and near mythical) immense penis (who cares about ethnicity) being when she breaks down? Why does the comment talk a lot about penis size? Because at more than 8 inches a d "very thick", her husband already fills he up to the capacity of her vaginal tract without tearing or leaving extra inches outside (maybe position dependent). And just commenting on the standard Literotica trop of the massive penises which apparently occur with high frequency all over these stories. A bit tiresome. And no I do just fine at a thick 7.625 inches. Anyways real disappointment is it goes from this lovely chapter to a crappy and lame blackmail rape with whoring and drugs for 7-8 weeks based on weak blackmail threat, complete irrationality on her part (especially after being drugged and gangbanged) and then ends in a a trite, brief reconciliation in the last chapter. This story went off the rails. Penis size rant over.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Good

Good filler chapter,.now let's get on to some drama. Still enjoyable.

ribnitinribnitinabout 5 years ago
POV originality

I like the way you announce POV change. Too many writers on Literotica wander between POVs, switching from one paragraph to the next and then back.

Your story, your pace.

jackdaniel100jackdaniel100over 5 years ago
A love story

This should actually be in the romance area. It is a great story, but I don't see it in loving wives.

MaxiMilfMaxiMilfalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Not finished.

There will be 2 more chapters. Due to holiday and vacation, chapter 2 is delayed, but will likely be up in a few days. Thanks for your patience.

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