All Comments on 'The Wedding'

You like white guys, really, no, I don't think you do. If you did you would leave us out of these stories, this is all made up bullshit, I get that, but no fucking way is your idiot talking the slut back, or marying her and espically not inviting him to the wedding. Thats fucking racist and insulting, and stupid, but these stories usually are.

Lauren finally realizes that Marcus is the one she wants to be with and have his baby. He rocks her world like no one else and she can't wait to have his children. She is in love and in heaven. Real nice love story and well written.

Another breeding bitch white woman yearning for BBC. Perhaps a little mdom added later for spice but Blackeyedgirl, The fantasy here is that once Marcus has her bred good and proper, the only visits will be the day the welfare check comes in the mail. Most Niggers can't remember to go to work everyday and on time, they all have a sixth sense on when that check comes in the mail. Before little Eldewan marcus gets his diapers and formula, Marcus will get his Marlboros, beer and when the food stamps come you can swap them for a little dope for old Marcus. Not racist honey, just F A C T S, Even our president's daddy moved on down the line after he had bred his mama.

quite a fantasy, but the turth is you would do it with any man no matter what race but i don't think they no matter what race would do it with you. MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU because i think your just a sick little woman.

no ne can that stupid. Please write a believable story.

How Fucking Stupid

White guys are stupid wimps, black guys are studs and women are sluts? I feel like I steped in something bad.

Do any black males have morals or sense of right and wrong? I guess there will always be white sluts who will drop and spread for their cocks, perfect matches for the black male. Of course black women aren't good enough for either black males or white males. At least that's what you read here on Literotica.

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I come here to be turned on, not sickened, no thanks.

it was really bad i mean nothing for a year then all of a sudden shes hooked and at the end when they are married in the hotel she send steve out to get condoms what did he leave the state it doesnt say anything about them getting cought or anything, he left to get some and never came back

Just then they heard a knock at the door. Marcus stated "I wonder who that can be?" Marcus gets up and opens the door only to find Steve standing behind the barrel of the largest handgun Marcus had ever seen in his entire life! Before marcus can say anything or close the door, the gun goes off and Marcus is launched backward into the room and lands on the floor, his head a bloody mess. As Lauren reacts to this the gun speaks again. This time Lauren's chest is ripped apart by the large projectile. The door to Marcus' suite is closed quietly and Steve just walks away. The end.

That ending is the closest to the truth and I really liked it also, thanks.

What a lousy way to treat another human being, but perhaps better then stringing him along even longer. Why in the world did she ever entice Steve back into his life just to destroy him a second time. Heartless is to kind to describe her.

Whoever said that about the races if there were meant to be a mixture of races don't you think it would have already been? There are is a reason for races and this is sickening. Technology but an end to the benefit of races and now the world will become one ugly race.

""" In front of the mirror she held her own belly and turned to the side. Her stomach would soon swell with Marcus' black baby, her breasts would also develop from the state she now witnessed. She wondered if the life they were to create together would already be growing inside her womb. She knew that Marcus would be a good strong father to the child, and her a doting mother. How could she not dote on a child that had been created by such a perfect union? """

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she'd join the legions of women, black and white, who are pushing a few tiny toddlers without their big, fuckin' Black sperm doners around... each of the kids having a different big black loving sperm doner, most growing up welfare. fucking a stranger Black guy, when she should be planning her marriage and future with her fiance, and now he's envisioning black babies filling out her stomach? <p>

I live near downtown Minneapolis and the number of women --- black and white --- who have many small Black babies and who pushing their baby strollers everywhere is pretty sizeable; they are everywhere, really....of course, these real Black men who put so much "love" into women and relationships, and so many babies into these black and white women's stomachs are different from the big, loving, stable, and forever faithful ones we read about by Black guys and White women writers in Literotica land.... <p>

and that says nothing but some other realities: fully 1/4 or more of Black men are in jail or with the correctional system in some ways, at any moment in time, and most of the Black men I know or come across here have been in jail... and medically, they are among the most infected by diseases, from the debilitating STDs to the deadly HIV, due to the nature of their over-average promiscuity... <p>

and the haggard looking women girls and women who have gone through a few, or a few dozen, of these Black guys... boy, you should look at their faces... one wonders if they could turn back the clock, they'd still do it all over again, by purposefully seeking out promiscuous black men to fuck around with in their early years, which got them down the road they now found themselves... <p>

fantasies are one thing; reality is quite another... <p>

Look at the faces of "porn stars" in general.... they are terrible after a few years (even if they went into the porn industry having some of the most beautiful, unblamished faces)... but look at the women who specialized in big black cock movies... within 2-3 years and their faces are dotted, pimpled, scarred, stretched... and no matter how much cosmetics they use, the videographers just don't do close-ups any more... very sad... most of these women, again, many were truly beautiful when first start out on that path... most are diseased beyond help and 99 percent of them just disappeared within 5-10 years and many died from all sorts of diseases and complications.... <p>

this, of course, is different a woman, black, white, asian what-not finding a mate in their life of work and the guy turned out to be of another race... but that's not the story here, is it? this is about white women having fantasies about fucking some STRANGE black MEN with big dicks, while the husband or finace is being made fun of, being cuckolded, with the white women and black lovers giggling to themselves about their cleverness and sex power (with the women usually being a bucket for bodily fluids)...

These comments show that your writing has a powerful effect on people. Looking forward to more of your work!

I love your stories! Looking forward to more.

Good fictitious story, guys please remember the difference between that and real life. Enjoy and move on, it's just entertainment nothing more.

I can't imagine any woman, on her wedding day, doing what she did. The only smart one was the soon to be ex-husband that put temptation in her path and found out that she really was a lying, cheating, adulterous slut. Simple annulment and she's history. Thank goodness.

She shouldn't have said her vows to the Steven dude, and just married the Marcus guy.

The bride finally made the right decision for herself. Even in today's society there are men and women who either get married to the wrong person for the wrong reasons or who leave either the bride or groom standing at the altar alone. It is no wonder our divorce rate is so high. Our society would be better off if all white women have to give birth to at least one black baby and all black women had to give birth to at least one white baby. Keep this up for at least four generations so that there would be more interracial children then maybe racism would finally start to disappear into a thing of the past. Keep up the good writing.

Just plain BAD !!!

Lauren is. I'm sure she'll make Marcus a wonderful faithful wife, erm...unless any of his well endowed black friends subsequently catch her eye.

You certainly managed to capture the very essence of a slut....

Maybe not a slut, but certainly a c*nt. Leading a fiance on not once, but twice, before changing her mind at the last moment while 'cheating' yet again. If she thought it was love, then why lead the guy on twice? If sexual attraction, then she still owed it to the would-be marriage partner to sort it out beforehand. And the action of an ultimatum to either 'trust' her or forget it to push a renewed commitment from the Steve character, THEN leaving right before the nuptials is the mark of a weak and/or untrustworthy prospective spouse. One would feel sorry for the Marcus character if she has (frequent?) weak moments with other guys. Is he a sucker too? THe kind of prospective mate you want to run the other way from, except for a one-nighter.

Excellent...