All Comments on 'The Wedding Day Breakfast'

by LoveLiterotica71

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SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 10 years ago
Bachelorette Party!

What a way to "join" the family. I like the way your mind works, this is a delightful fuck. Not sure where you'd go in continuing this, I guess you could have Brent babysit and renew his relationship with his DIL, you could also use his son in an affair with his mother in law!

peebudypeebudyalmost 10 years ago
quick but good

she went from funny feeling to fucking pretty fast, but it was a good story. would like to know if she kept fucking Brent on the side.

maybe a story about the husband fucking her parents at the same time!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Nice!! There's needs to be a part 2#

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Since there is no loyalty

Since there is no loyalty to son by father or wife to be, there should be some consequences. You're the writer. Would you want it to happen to you?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wedding day return

This is an awesome start to a mini series! Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Makes sense if Cody was doing Miranda's mom as well.

Great story....this reminds me of the time I went to a friend's wedding and actually ended up in bed with her sisters (not at the same time or course). Anyway, that was some fun times. Oh...and please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
NEED PART 2,3,4,5,6,7 PLEASE AUTHOR!

CAN YOU PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY.

MrBill36MrBill36almost 10 years ago
A Wedding Day Present

Your user name through me for a temporary loss - I'm 77. Your story was well presented and flowed nicely. Thanks for the write and please continue. Although I have never done anything like this, I did fantasize.

Slithy2013Slithy2013almost 10 years ago
More please

In the words of Billy Idol. "With a rebel yell, she cried more, more, MORE".

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yes continue

This is hot stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
My wife...

and my dad fucked for over 20 years before he died. We often had threesomes. I loved watching them

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 4 years ago
More, Please!

I would love to read more of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 2 years ago

This was hot. The "grandson" needs a sibling. We need at least a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Just ugly stupid trash.

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Started writing on here in 2014 and fell off mid 2015. Not because I don't enjoy writing, I do. More so because I am in college and was finishing off my BA. That's finished now, but presently, I have a career I love, and am also in grad school until 2023. Will try to get the s...