All Comments on 'The Wedding Present'

There was plenty of sex in this story, perhaps not in vivid detailed words, but enough to make this story 100% hot nonetheless.

One of my favorites. I do hope you'll be posting The Art Critic, which is my favorite of your tales.

I'm glad to see people are enjoying this. More to come!

...how he set Eileen to start.

Wish my wife would turn me into a maid. Let me wear heels or boots everyday. Use me as a sex toy. Put me on hormones. I hope you add a few more chapters.

now that was unexpected. i like it though. very much.

love it!

About half way through I felt this story would be cool with a twist like this and near the end I dam near guessed it.

A "Playboy" is going to let a woman dominant him? It the premise wasn't so sad, I'd laugh. But nothing in this story is worth laughing about. Just unbelievable.

More likely he takes the tapes, uses the ones he needs and divorces her. Simply too unbelievable. Even for fiction it was bad.

Another predictable story. Not very erotic. " Revenge" would have been a better title.

then again: lack of explanation as to how Eileen become Bill's slave would have been interesting.

That was very funny.