All Comments on 'The Weekend Slave Ch. 01'

Good start, I'd like to read more.

Let's please proceed to Chapter 2 and beyond...

Good start. Now for Chapter 2,3,4.......

I agree with the other comments. This is a great start. Keep it up!! "Pun Intended"

If you have any ideas for where the story should go or what Anna should do to Ryan next, let me know. I have a few ideas but feedback is welcome! Thanks for the comments so far!

Welcome to Literotics - this first chapter made a wonderful introduction - you really MUST write more, and soon, please ;) !

I liked it, you should definitly write more in my opinion.

Excellent start please continue does Anna have any friends visiting over the weekend ??

you should definite write more. :) great so far!

So many things I love about this. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Instant addition to my favorite authors ;)

Great start! Please continue...

Please add more. It is a great beginning.

Bare Hugs

Nudy

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Oh Yes what a story with a difference, this should go well and be a great story, I'm hoping it will have lots of chapters, great....