All Comments on 'The Windjammer Cruise Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great start to a new story

You have done a great job with the start of this story. I can only hope we see additional chapters very soon. Wouldn't mind seeing longer chapters.

RealDocRealDocover 15 years ago
keep writing.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Please keep them coming at lest on a daily basis.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well

Decent writing, we'll see where it goes. If I thought about cheating around my kids they would have my ass, all kids would. Don't know any spouses that would stay home in snow and miss this trip.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It's a start

Seems a waste to publish a fragment of a story. It would have been better to complete it

Decent writing, though, so don't be discouraged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Chapter 2

...had better be BETTER & LONGER!

sqheadgermansqheadgermanover 11 years ago
Very Ibterrestion

Its another grate story, thanks...

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Two cheaters shit on their families in this lame shit.

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