All Comments on 'The Witch and the Dragon Ch. 19'

by LevanaHyll

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HimalayandewHimalayandewover 11 years ago
sobs !!!!

My heart is twisting in a wrenching pain ,Oh dear alluna how much she have to suffer and more , and now she becomes victim of the evilness of her step sisters ,really i,m also praying that zak comes and get her before she gets harmed in any way ,and take her back to alpha 7 ,let everybody else just got to hell if they can,t see them happy together in love . Now i think thats enough of melodrama ,lets get to the point ............,hmm......... this chapter was as good as your every chapter of this story coz they all represent the important events of this story ,i was so happy to see that alluna is remembering zak slowly and the artistic way you described the scenes and wow the mermaids though i too feel fear from those mythical creatures LOL , my only complain is about the shortness of this chapter and you cliff hanging climaxes , though every chapter you write so fascinatingly makes us so desperate for the next one, make for the time you take to post them but its not good to make somebody wait for so long ;) .please try to post next chapter as soon as possible :) love you <3 ,

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The suspense!

I recently began reading your stories, I read The Witch and the Dragon up to chapter 18, then I read AoR, which I enjoyed aswell. When is chapter 20 going to be released? The suspense is killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
This just keeps getting better and better!!!!

I recently found your story and LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it :) Can't wait to see the twists and turns and love the mermaids.

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonover 11 years ago
Cliffhanger

As always you leave the story with the best cliffhangers. I can not wait till Luna remembers Zak :) This is a wonderful story and I await the next chapter as always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
seth's story

Seth should be gay

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 11 years agoAuthor
Seth!!!!?

Lolz! Hmmm. He's too straight-laced and uptight to be gay (I think). But two stories from this one somebody's gonna give us a big surprise. Some people might already know who.

KyriaeKyriaeover 11 years ago
lovely

its nice to see u back again and writing. chtp 20 please hurry and post

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelover 11 years ago
(still hanging by the nails)

pls update soon will be waiting same place same time LOL

http://free-extras.com/images/garfield_cartoon-1076.htm

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Of course

Wicked step-sisters!

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelover 11 years ago
= = btw

To Anon : Seth is not gay!! Just because he doesn't act like a male slut but chose who he will fuck he should not be call uptight or just wish he was gay. HE IS JUST PICKY! and just kinda serious/conservative. Not to mention he have a crush on Amarant and just want her.

To my luvey : As for the other 2 I think I know who it is but pls give me a warning at the 1 ch when you write a gay or lesbien story so I know what to expect. I will read it since it's your story (u write great stories lines and plots etc) , I just gonna jump over the sex scences.

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 11 years agoAuthor
chapter 20

...was just uploaded, Sunday, 8/19/12, a little after 8 pm. I have dutifully ignored my boyfriend stomping aorund the house because I've had my nose stuck in the laptop all day. I finally finished the chapter and will take a break before starting chapter 21. I'm trying to write longer chapters, but this story is definitely coming to its conclusion. Here's to hoping everyine likes this next chapter, which I guess should be up maybe Wedensday or Thursday. For those of you that haven't read the other books that come before this one, FALLEN ANGEL is first, followed by DARK PRINCE, and then ANGEL OF RETRIBUTION. The next book after WITCH AND DRAGON is DARK ANGEL which will be Ashriel's and Annie's story.

Thanks to all those who voted and commented. :)

LH

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Im in love with this story

I am so awaiting the next chapter. I love the mermaids and all the folklore. Personally I love the master theme and I have voted a 5 on every chapter. :). Keep up the goodwork.

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