by charlesplingham
The only thing for me was that I'd have liked to see some flash to their normal selves. A sense that part of them is aware of what's happening, that it is a fantasy brought to life, but that they don't care, they surrender to whatever urge has been suppressed but released by the magic, but otherwise I'm really enjoying these
What a stupendous idea richie78!
I'm currently in the process of editing all twelve books and stories together into a single book. Perhaps I'll add a bonus story of sorts that gives us a glimpse inside their minds as they slowly succumb to Donna's magic.
Thanks so much for the feedback!