All Comments on 'The Wrong Room Ch. 09'

THE STORY THAT JUST KEEPS GIVING AND GIVING...ONE OF THE BEST, I HAVE READ...! BETTY jo xoxo

i am always looking out for the next installment in this wonderful story, well done awesome , thank you

Love is love and your characters are so real. Enjoyed every chapter and am looking forward to read more, hopefully soon.

Thanks for sharing,

Santacruzman

I love this story. I hope there will be another chapter. Your writing is fantastic

love this story, truelly hope to read more.thanks.

Like I asked in Chapter 5!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED WHEN THEY GOT HOME??????? CAR????? MARRIAGE??????? ADOPTATION??????? WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!

Great read. Would love to see more.

Thank you hope its not over

I really enjoy this story, But I like your longer stories more, your the kind of writer that I really like to immerse myself in your worlds and the flash format make that difficult. But your doing a good job with the limitations of the format.

I love the emotions and that fact that they want this to be a family.

Good story, but the ending seems incomplete.

Awesome! Loved the whole story!!

An excellent story that really shows how tough things can be on certain types of people no matter how incredible they are. I really was hoping for more since it does seem to feel like it lacks a proper ending.while it was a fun read, it still managed to strike me emotionally. Thanks for posting it.

Good story, I said earlier I hope it's finished, but like so many others on here it isn't.

Youve started and finished others, but abandoned this one.

Just why?

Well there’s my morning gone, I really have loved reading this story you have written for us to enjoy. I love the way to weaved in and out of different places , things and situations.

I do wish in the grand scheme of things that you might have made each chapter a tad longer, as they seem slightly rushed but thank you all the same for sharing your craft with us all. xxx