All Comments on 'The Y-Virus Ch. 06'

I'd like to take this opportunity to apologize to my readers for taking so long in putting this chapter up on the site. I've been extremely busy these last few months with work, family, personal buisiness, and with moving into a new apartment in a new state. I hope I'll have more time for myself in the coming months. I promise that I'll try my best to put the next chapter up in a more timely fashion. Once again, I'm sorry.

Thank you. Was waiting for this chapter since a while. Nice continuation.

Don't worry about it, I love the series but it's better if you take your time and do it right instead of rushing a half-assed story out ;)

5/5

I like the premise of your story, and most of the execution. However, I wonder if things have been a little too idyllic, for a little too long. The protagonist is taking a lot of things on faith, and the TestiTracker is starting to become a Chekov's Gun issue. He needs a Problem, or a Mystery. Something to triumph over, or solve. Otherwise, just reading about him get laid, and get pleasured with futuristic sex toys, will get old at some point

This story really hits home, now that the Corona Virus (Covid-19) is out and about, this story really has an impact.

I keep getting the feeling something bad or sinister is going to happen, but besides the rape from when Ryan first woke up there hasn't been anything serious. The setting of the story is great, but like Anon said 7 years ago - it needs something dramatic to happen in order to keep the reader engaged. Hopefully that'll happen in these last 2 chapters