All Comments on 'Their Own World Ch. 01'

Please don't make us wait.

Don't torture us, give us the rest already! :)

Can't wait to read the next part of this.

what a great build up. Love it. Ignore the anon grammar police. Cowards hide behind anonymity.

Anxious to read some more of this hot seduction.

That was romantic smut and I loved it please don't make us wait to long for chapter two

You handled the story well. Never getting too bogged down with irrelevant detail, instead keeping the teasing playfulness nicely simmering. I enjoyed the sister's control of her brother's emotions - and her devious planning. A five star piece.

Thanks to all of you who showed my first story some love. This is only the beginning and seeing that other's enjoyed it was exactly what i needed to hear. Chapter 2 should be out in a few days and I will be finishing chapter 3 tonight. Stay tuned because this is just the beginning.

Don't stop now

Please...some hair for T's chest? Maybe light blonde, but not too thick?

Loved the story to death !!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue this great story !!!!!!!!!!!!