All Comments on 'There for the Taking'

Frog-eating cat's vomit.

(In case you're still wondering - me no like)

The writing was well done. I think a few of the conversational lines were a little clumsy and the use of the word "bastard" was a bit overdone, but overall, the writing was pretty good.

The only thing that got me was the plot. First of all, I'm not much into rape stories, real, or fantasy. I only read all the way through this one, because the author had asked for my feedback. Second, it didn't take but just a few lines into the rape to figure out the rest of the story. I wasn't a bit surprised that this was her husband and that they were acting out a fantasy forced rape scene.

So, bottom line, the writing was pretty good, certainly much better than many I have seen. But I didn't care for the story plot and had I not been reading because the author asked me to, I would have stopped and moved along to another story very quickly, near the beginning.

That's my honest assessment. Decent writing, but I just didn't like the plot.