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Click here"Oh -- and the boots, skirt, white blouse and pants combo was utterly perfect. You are simply the most beautiful woman there is."
"All for you, my love."
"Thank you, gorgeous. Let's clean up and go home. I feel an overwhelming need to go to bed with my wife and wrap myself up around her."
"Deal."
THE END...?
I love you, baby. I hope you like the story.
- COMMENTS
DooMyWife2about 10 years agoThe writing was well done. I think a few of the conversational lines were a little clumsy and the use of the word "bastard" was a bit overdone, but overall, the writing was pretty good.
The only thing that got me was the plot. First of all, I'm not much into rape stories, real, or fantasy. I only read all the way through this one, because the author had asked for my feedback. Second, it didn't take but just a few lines into the rape to figure out the rest of the story. I wasn't a bit surprised that this was her husband and that they were acting out a fantasy forced rape scene.
So, bottom line, the writing was pretty good, certainly much better than many I have seen. But I didn't care for the story plot and had I not been reading because the author asked me to, I would have stopped and moved along to another story very quickly, near the beginning.
That's my honest assessment. Decent writing, but I just didn't like the plot.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoFrog-eating cat's vomit.
(In case you're still wondering - me no like)
