All Comments on 'Things Happen For A Reason Ch. 03'

by chezshirecat

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gizzmo301gizzmo301over 19 years ago
Third

A great third chapter.... give us more!

jdeerejdeereover 19 years ago
Great Story!!!!!!!!!!

You have written a very good story with an excellent story line. The sex was written very real life. The added mystery of the state of their marrige just adds spice to the story. Please keep the chapters coming quickly!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WOW Great FAntastic

You are setting a very high benchmark for other writers.

Keep up the great work - Don't let this one get away please.

Balance - Consequence - Reality - Beliveability - all are critical important ingredients in married erotisism stories.

Thanks for your fine efforts to this point!!!!

ryu77ryu77over 19 years ago
Nice development

We can assume that at least Luke loves Sarah unconciously??

Oh man, will Sarah spill her guts in the next chapter? Can't wait!!

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
Great story so far.

I really like the fact that it has a mystery to it. I think that when stories of their past come out, the husband will begin remembering some things.

I also think that Jack will be a welcome addition to the couple when he makes his appearance.

Keep up the good work and thank you for your effort with this story.

wjthermanwjthermanover 19 years ago
Keep this up!

You keep doing such a good job, and I hope you'll continue. I'm really enjoying this story as it progresses!!!

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