All Comments on 'Things That Go Bump in the Dark'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice story

Rushed things toward the end a little but the joy in the interactions of the characters was readily apearant. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Yummy

One of those moments you would have wished to had been there!! Great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Beautiful

Amazing! Simply one of the most hot stories I have ever read! I don't usually go for group sex but this is one sizzling exception. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Hot, Sexy, & Alot of Fun!!!

Not to mention, unique aka not another boring, recycled, oh so predictable theme. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Rushed ending, but very good story anyway

Still a very good story, despite rushed ending.

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