All Comments on 'Things That Go Bzzz In The Noontime Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very perveted but WANT MORE

Just read the second chapter for "Things That go Bzzzz...". Fucking loved it! Please continue the story line. Gonna bookmark your bio page in my favs. Can't wait for the teasing teens to get taught a lesson!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
This was a great story until I came to the

finger in the shit hole part

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good-un

Great story line, has heaps of potential for development!

Keep on writing, you have a definite magic touch.

Cheers - David.

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