All Comments on 'Third Domination'

Love to hear what his punishment entails. Hope he meets the other slave girl too, much room for future chapters!

Interesting scene. Well written. Not overly erotic, and predictable. Still: an enjoyable read

Great story - love the mix of pleasure and pain etc .....you know both slaves will fail and be punished ....would love to read how they are punished - maybe they should witness each other's punishment as they were both instrumental in making each other fail

That was erotically entertaining thanks for sharing it.

just the right mix of anticipation, threats and permitted release. Well constructed and written