All Comments on 'This Wasn't Supposed To Happen'

Loved it until the parents got involved, and what happened with the blackmail tape? Did Kara move up the ranks? Seems like this is an unfinished story as far as the school part in concerned.

It's not impossible that something like this could happen, and why not, when push comes to shove. It's only sex, after all, and the desire could arise between family members, nearly as between strangers. What about mom and daughter - dad and son? Not a top rating, but 4*, anyway.

Ok, totally plausible. But dialog to the children should be like adults and not juveniles. But overall I liked where it went

Adding the parents at the end made it seem like a dirty old man manipulating his wife to have sex with her son just so he could mind-fuck his daughter in having sex with him.

Absolutely great until then but then died in the arse.

They have been making love but now it's time for them to let go of their inhibitions and fuck like crazy.

5 Stars!

I was loving the story with Kara and Jake together, but lost all interest when the parents forced their way into the relationship. It was something sweet, if not exactaly innocent, and then it just became dirty and sex.

Interesting that the parents' involvement wasn't as popular as the siblings. Sorry! I thought both parts would have had an audience, given the number of stories there are involving parents, but feedback taken.

Adding the parents wasn't bad per se, but the way in which it developed with them kind of killed the story a bit for me.

Lovely story of family togetherness

It's really disrespectful

Very good for your first effort.

Until the Russians invaded and made them all eat chocolate cake. Then Granny fingered Putin's butthole.

good tale but I would never let a girl or boy go to college with out birth control.

the brother and father having sex with a girl not on birth control is stupid.

I thought the story was going great until the parents got involved, maybe that's just me.

I loved it until the parents wanted to join in. That ruined it for me.

My idea of a story!! Thought it was great - and certainly don't mind the parents joining in. lol

......then Mom & Dad got "frisky." You screwed up a good story!

I agree with all the comments that say bringing in the parents ruined the story. Up until that point, the story was really good. Even believable. I was loving it, until the parents came into the picture. I don't find that credible, especially as it, um, unfolded. Dirty Old Man with incest in his own youthful past engineered things to persuade or compel his wife, just so he could screw his luscious teenage daughter. And I still want to know what became of the blackmail video!

Started as a great story until the parents got involved. One star because of that, no more of this one please.

I really liked the story , wish daughter had eaten mother, sucking dad's cum from her

The sorority setup was really hot and the emotions felt by their realization felt real. But as soon as they all of a sudden started to have sex it went downhill. It felt completely rushed. Especially the parents involvement.

I think Jake should have cum inside Kara and his Mom and Dad should have cum inside Kara and Mom - Babies galore!

Wow, harsh comments from some people! I thought the story was great, very well written and it evolved well, had a natural flow to it and of course...very hot! Don't listen to those others, they're just wanting their own personal kinks reflected in your story.

This is a great story

okay story the first half.. then you brought in the mum & dad,

I fucking hate it, when the story ends up going down that road... the very thought of that make me want to be sick..

that's just the same as gran & granddad, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek ..

so No star rate from me.. just - 100 %

I never read any more stories from authors/story tellers that spoil the first one I read...

The first part was realistic but the part with the parents was so phony that it was nauseating. It was as if a lascivious 12 yr. old had taken over writing the story.

Five stars at the start reduced to two.

Well that got the auto dump and a 1 star!

It was pretty good right up until you added the parents into it. You gave us all a warning about it, but sometimes it's handled in a manner that makes it easier to deal with. That doesn't happen here. 1/5