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Cplsal about 7 years ago

Hoping for more!!!

Amazing!!!. Great characters and some nice foreshadowing. Again another chapter would be great.

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Great Story

I really enjoyed reading it, and you write very well. The only thing I couldn't figure out is why you kept capitalizing "the city". Typical California Conceit?

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Well done

Very touching story. Often the right person is right in front of you. It takes an absence or change to get some to realize it.

scotlyt about 7 years ago

Awesome story

Great story, I didn't want it to end.

Anonymousabout 6 years ago

Loved This!

Great story with a happy ending! ~ 5+

Rancher46 over 2 years ago

What a great love story especially with the happily ever after. Well done 5++++stars

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