by WokeUpOneDay
What a great love story especially with the happily ever after. Well done 5++++stars
Very touching story. Often the right person is right in front of you. It takes an absence or change to get some to realize it.
I really enjoyed reading it, and you write very well. The only thing I couldn't figure out is why you kept capitalizing "the city". Typical California Conceit?
Amazing!!!. Great characters and some nice foreshadowing. Again another chapter would be great.