All Comments on 'Thoroughly Loving Nina Ch. 01'

this is really hard to read. some sentences don't even make sense. you should have had someone read it and edit it for you and if you did then you shouldn't use them again.

also this guy is a fucking asshole. he openly states he isn't anything special to look at he is broke and kind of worthless yet he has all these standards for what makes a girl worth his time....... also wtf does he mean he doesn't like dogs that like women? this dude shouldn't ever get a girl and should be relegated to masturbating for the rest of his miserable life.