All Comments on 'Three'

Can't wait for it to be continued!

May the Sacred Heart of Jesus be adored, glorified, loved and preserved throughout the world now and for ever. Sacred Heart of Jesus pray for us. St Jude worker of miracles pray for us. St Jude helper of the hopeless pray for us.

Repeat nine times for nine days.

Loved the beginning of this - with the blonde hearing her friend! very sexy!!

for more. Do you think of us thinking of you writing your stories for us? Do you imagine us reading them?

Great work!

The comment from Judas Thaddeus down there freaked me out a little, but hey - if this is sin, get me my handbasket, because I know where I'm going!

Another fun story, OG. I would only smoothen the transition in the middle; add something like "She was caught; her surprised dollface framed by moonlight through the cracked doorway; a no-longer anonymous witness to their lusty encounter." Sounds like you can work more than a storyline, though.