All Comments on 'Three Months in One Day'

Very nice! A real loving wife story! It's kind of refreshing!

I never read stories like this, but I saw it under the new stories.

You are a great writer and obviously a great wife.

Keep it up.

....but it was just a snippet.Please write a story next time, if you're going to post on a story site. (as opposed to a creative writing site.)

I have to admit , it was a bit too flowery for me because it was from a woman's point of view , so I just skimmed through it to get the general idea . I have to give you high marks for the content , attitude , and devotion of the wife . Few folks here know what thats all about , let alone write it out .

Nice story of a couple in their new house.

I wonder what she has been doing with boss for three months?

Good story about monogamous love.

What I think is that he is one selfish bastard. He leaves his wife for three months and then comes home and does a cum dump on his wife. He doesn't prepare her for penetration, just rams it in. What a selfish bastard! He certainly doesn't deserve her, but she loves him anyway. I'm not real sure of her mental capacity either.

The short story is well written, from a technical standpoint, it's just that the characters are deficient.

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