All Comments on 'Threesome'

really confusing. I know you want to get all the perspectives in but it just comes off as jumbled and maze-like. Try focusing on one person and re-submit the story. I would love to read it again

I stopped in the middle, not because the story wasn't hot, but because I felt like I was reading an outline and, like the other comment, I found myself a little lost with all the character shifting. The section title would state one thing, but the words seemed to go with someone else.

What can I say? Thanks for the comments, first of all. The different views seemed like a good idea at the time, but considering your comments, it probably wasn't. I'll let it stand as it is, for the time being, but I'll certainly will keep it in mind for other stories.

@anonymous: I'll give it a thought to re-write the story to a single person perspective, though that would make it a very short short story indeed :-).

Any preferences on whose perspective it should be? Can't promise anything, though. Once I finalized a story my mind kind of finishes with it and I find it difficult to get started on it again. Besides that I have read it so often by then that I'm glad if I don't have to do so for a few months at least.

That is the cruelest thing I've ever read in Literotica. Please lock this author's life.

Das ist das Grausamste, was ich je in Literotica gelesen habe. Bitte diesen Autor lebenslang sperren.

really confusing. i can´t believe anything

from your words.