by cuckingtheway
All the idiots that don't like this must have a -1 intelligence. It's clear in the title what its about so why read it? You're all closeted cucks and wish your imaginary wives would do this.
Normally I would recommend rereading what you have written to catch mistakes but there are so many that I don't think it would help.
You need someone to help you with your sentence structure, forming paragraphs, and story flow. You need help finding your voice.
Good luck.
Would have been a whole lot better if some one had edited it.
I'm another one to tell you, please use an editor! Just so many errors. The most egregious was calling "Tim" "Phil". It's near the beginning. I have no problem with a guy sharing his wife, but this was hard to read because no editor was used. Rated it 3 stars because the story was O.K., but the execution was poor.
Good real story from, get this, a real person, not a pro writer. Better to have a real story than flowery bs.
Im not here to read literary classics.
Whether your story is true or not ~ it sure READS like it's a real and true story. I like the story line ~ and each person's involvement. If I visualize the path this story leads; it looks like ~ in the end ~ three people will be living and loving together. The sex is never gonna get boring ! !
By the way; I come here for The Story. I could care less about punctuation or correct spelling. You tell a good tale.
Guess you couldn't smell it on her or you loved knowing she was fucking the fleet made you happy. When she died w/o fucking you, that's when you got pissed. So I have this a 5 just because you are pissed off, again! What an asshole you are.
"I'm not here to read literary classic"
Yes, you uneducated only care about smut, no matter how badly written. Duh.
BUT I HAVYE TO TELL YOU MY WIFE AND I HAD A 3 SO-ME WITH HER GF IT WAS PLANNED BY MY AND HER GF AND FROM THAT DAY ON MY WIFE TURNED BI AND ENJOYED HAVING SEX WITH HER GIRLFRIEND AND I ENJOYED IT TREMENDOUSLY AND THE THING WAS HER GF WAS MY BEST MAN AT MY WEDDING AND A OLD SCHOOL BUIDDY....I HAD A GREAT TIME AND MY WIFES GF TAIUGHT HER TO LOVE ANAL .....LOL I HAD A GREAT TIME FOR MANY YEARS BUT SADLY MY WIFE AND HER GF BOTH DIED 3 YEARS WITHIN EACH OTHER.....I REMEBER THE OLD DAYS WITH A SMILE AS I LOOK TO THE HEAVENNS SMILING
Not a bad story for a 3some/cuck theme, as someone else mentioned, clean up the grammer and it would probably sound alot better to the reader. I gave it a 4
Maybe elaborate on this story and turn it into a cuck theme or wife turned slut theme.
It was a good story for the most part. Hey anonymous before you criticize someone's literary skills proof read your comments. The title tells you what your about to read. Again good story. 5
ONCE A COCK ENTERS THE VAGINA OF A WIFE THAT ISN'T HER HUSBANDS THE HUSBAND BECOMES A CUCKOLD.
My wife and I one night at a bar so her ex-bf we had a few drinks with him and we had talked before about a threesome and then he asked me if she could dance with her I said sure and I could tell you were getting really close on the dance floor we had had a few drinks and when she came back I said do you want to for fill your fantasy? Her reply was do you and I said yes because I know you loved having sex with him she paused and said you’re right or you sure you can handle it and I said absolutely about 15 minutes later I invited him to our house and at our house and made more drinks and we all began to dance and then I stripped Tammy and we danced nude she stripped him and within 15 minutes she was on her knees sucking us both . The next thing that happened yes I told him I wanted him to fuck her first he slid his 7 1/2 inch Boner in my life and I proceeded to kiss her suck her nipples along with him and then I even electrical at all he was fucking her she went wild she had a screaming orgasm he pulled out I put her doggy style I began to fuck her cunt in Pussy as she licked his cock clean and he even made out with her I was coming in her he ended up staying the night and he fucked her two more times now but once a month either fuck you’re with him or I watch him fuck her and I love it I love my wife having a boyfriend makes our sex better to
In so glad she did not run off and fuck behind hubby's back...glad he was there and involved...the only way to do wife sharing
A lot of husbands wish they could see their wife in one these situations But cannot pull the trigger to allow wife to get her and or his wish too bad for some Just a saying