All Comments on 'Through Artemisia's Window Ch. 01'

by Jayded_Lust

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Equality2Equality2about 15 years ago
Well Done

Congratulations on a well written story. I am looking forward to Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good!

nice story and imo about the perfect length. Will read chapter two when I'm ready again...

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexover 7 years ago
Great characterisation

This was a surprise, keeping the primary narrative character in thought and word effortlessly. As always, a pleasure to read such well-written prose, the combination of physical, emotional and mental for each character varied with description and action that made the story flow effortlessly. Thanks for writing!

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 5 years ago
Very fucking HOT

Just love how both women are learning something about themselves

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