All Comments on 'Through Artemisia's Window Ch. 01'

Just love how both women are learning something about themselves

This was a surprise, keeping the primary narrative character in thought and word effortlessly. As always, a pleasure to read such well-written prose, the combination of physical, emotional and mental for each character varied with description and action that made the story flow effortlessly. Thanks for writing!

nice story and imo about the perfect length. Will read chapter two when I'm ready again...

Congratulations on a well written story. I am looking forward to Chapter 2.