All Comments on 'Thy Kingdom Come Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love the story

Really wish to see completion. I hate incomplete stories, and this was turning into a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You should continue the story!

Hello!

Enjoying reading your story about the angel Olivia and the demon-lord Taint I am courious how it will go on? Now they are on earth an there ist another couple, Warith an Aurora comming closer...I would really like to know, how they will cope with the new situation an how the three (or perhaps four?) will manage to get back home...

I would be very habby to read... and I would like to thank you to share your story with us. I am sure, I am not die only one who would like to know more...

Greetings from a big fan!

fefe428fefe428almost 9 years ago
Still Hoping....

I'm still hoping you'll continue this sequel!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Please continue!!!!! This was such a good chapter, I want more!!!! Please!!!!!

fefe428fefe428over 9 years ago
Hope there's more....

I loved the first story and you're off to such a good start here....how come you haven't written for such a long time???

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 10 years ago
it's so good!!!

please continue.

rider66rider66about 10 years ago
Excellent!

Please continue! The story has gotten better with each chapter!

LustDominaLustDominaover 10 years ago

This is one of the best chapters!!

I loved it!! Especially the action between aurora and Wraith!!

So hot!! I wish I was Aurora everytime I read it!!!

Cant wait for the next one!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
goooooood story

Can't wait for the next chapter hope it comes soon;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it!!

Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

That was an exciting chapter. Aurora and Wraith made it super hot. I normally don't care for story sequels but I think I will be sticking around as long as the chapters are this good.

Hethen129Hethen129over 10 years ago
wow

Excited about the next chapter just wish they were longer

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