by Winterscumming
Amazing! I loved it.
I'm a writer and you inspired me to pick up mine again. Please keep this up :)
Dominance and submission games are not my kink, but as always, you write an awesome piece of work.
The story has an incredible plot that just sucked me in like a black hole.
I want... I want to........I need to read the next chapter.
Please continue, just as I started getting worked up it ended.
Your story's on a roll! Keep up the great work. Can't wait for chapter 3......
Please keep writing this and stories like this. I didn’t know how much I needed it.
Such a beginning they are making. This will be a long, enjoyable series at this rate. Or you could jump ahead, and give us a few key flashback scenes.
You've really got something good going here.
Even if you never finish it, your writing is good. You should always find some way to write.
Loved the two parts, but I feel like you're just setting down the rules before the "good" stuff begins. Since part 2 was written in 2018, should we give up expecting anything more? If you're writing somewhere else, I'd love to know where so I can read more.