All Comments on 'Ties That Bind'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
decent

it's a four star though. because the "i took her for granted" thing ruined the immersion.

she never apologized for using one single photo as grounds for divorce. no talks, no PI investigation, no effort on her part to trust her husband even a tiny fucking amount to be suspicious. and like an idiot, he doesn't expect an apology because....reasons?

we the reader never once knew he neglected her. if anything it seemed he was all over her when he wasn't working hard. so it made no sense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot and Sexy

Great story idea. Loved the heat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved the Mix of Heat and Romance

Hope there's more of this to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

He should have taken Alisha home so they both could tie her up and teach her a lesson! Let the cops have Karl!

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