All Comments on 'Time For Change'

Dialogue by a 10 year old. Storyline by a rock. I'm STILL laughing at how bad this was. Just horrible.

I thought this was very special; it reminded me of a tipsy night many years ago when my wife and I started talking about our fantasies in a roundabout way. Sadly, it never survived that one time and we were both too embarrassed to try it again - or even accept it had happened. We are, I guess, still both unsatisfied, our fantasies buried if not withered away. Your story moved me a lot - thank you.

A good erotic theme and well written. Please continue, and ignore the insecure types who post disparaging comments.