All Comments on 'Time for Some Fun Ch. 01'

Love it. Explores the victim in detail and doesn't shy away from the mean side or having a power like this. Great job!

This story is so amazing I really hope that it continues on for a long time. I would of preferred the blonde be in the place of the raven haired girl, but that's my own preference. I like blondes. Hope you keep up the awesome story with many other girls he encounters. Maye be even sneaks into a dorm room and keeps moving the roommates into lesbian positions. If you decided to do that, hope they are blonde. Both of them being virgins would be nice too :)

How sexy would it be if the main char stopped time and inserted some toys into a girls pussy and or asshole. Preferably at a time where she can not take them out so she has to suffer with them inside her.

Thanks Wof2 and anon for the kind words and suggestions. Part 2 has been submitted and should be coming out in a few days. I am looking for suggestions about future parts, so thanks Wof2 for your ideas (some teasers: part 2 does include a few toys). I'll definitely take your suggestions into account. Part 2 has a disclaimer at the beginning asking for suggestions on who readers want to see our protagonist go after next, so be sure to look out for Part 2 and leave your suggestions there as well. Cheers, and glad you guys liked the story

Lately nothing is more of a turn off to me than seeing people buy into the myth of the unbroken hymen. Please do some research on basic female anatomy. The hymen isn't some barrier that needs to be broken, and I'm really tired of people buying into this myth. I mean think about logically for two seconds: if the hymen was some barrier and testament to virginity like you think, how could virgins menstruate?

I swear, there should be a basic anatomy test on sites like this so people can't enforce medieval science.