Timestopper Begins Ch. 28

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Again I thought what a shame I could not bring penises to a state of orgasm out of time. So amusing if I could have tickled and stroked them so when time started they just went off - yes, ejaculated. To have seen the girls' shocked look not just at the erections but them both suddenly spurting their creamy fluid all over the girls would have been a priceless thing to see. The shock and surprise not just on the girls' faces but the boys as well. Alas, it was not something I could do, but, as I enjoyed the warm wetness of Susie's mouth on my erection, I could at least pull the two cocks hard down so they bounded upwards rather dramatically when time restarted.

I watched my erection moving in Susie's mouth and then turned to the lads. "Such a shame for you that you are not going to be doing this!"

So amusing! And then my brow furrowed. Whoops! "Or, indeed, this." I said turning back and staring down at Susie and my penis sliding to and fro between her lips, "Five, four, three, two - ah, fuck, YES!"

Yep, I had certainly overdone it. Once the glands have started the process there was no stopping it. The various constituents of semen were mixed together and expelled; rushing up my little tube and pouring into Susie's mouth. Had she sucked before? Would the taste be all new to her? It was all too late to ponder these things or whether perhaps I should have come in the girl back in the changing room. I had been overcome by the pleasure of Susie's mouth!

Stepping back there was everybody just as before except Susie's open and gaping mouth was rather creamy full!

There was now no need to leave my shorts off. I was 'done' for the time being. Settling back I regarded the tableau for a little while and then let time 'gently' flow again.

Gently! Hardly! First the bounding penises followed by the two lads sitting down so fast it was almost invisible causing a great splash and surge of water. Susie went into a paroxysm of coughing; my semen splattering all over the foaming and disturbed water and her friend saying,

"What the...?"

"Our shorts..." said the boys almost in unison.

Susie's face a picture; her hand wiping her mouth and she just looking so puzzled. Pretty innocence I thought!

Probably I should have moved the girls so they were clasping erections underwater; suddenly finding themselves holding rigid fleshy poles rather like or, indeed, very like Jayne had found herself doing in the sauna many months before. What fun they could all have had - if it had been a private Jacuzzi and they all alone - except for me. But I was not so interested anymore; my penis had done its deed for the morning and my thoughts turned to having a shower and getting on with the rest of the day. Subtly with my foot I pushed four pairs of shorts and two bikini tops to the middle of the Jacuzzi and stood. Smiling at everyone I stood up and got out, turning, as I walked away, I could see scraps of material floating up into the Jacuzzi.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
step outside your boundaries

Hasn't everyone had a fantasy where there are no recriminations, no comeback so you are free to do whatever you want.

This story series is just that put in to words, So if, just if, it happened to you how would you handle it?

I think the writer has handled it well as the time stopper starts out with good intentions and descends to his baser emotions as there is no one to wag a finger at him. As an outside observer it is sometimes uncomfortable as in the last episode as we are bound by conventions and know what is right and wrong.

It is so easy to slide in to wrong doing e.g. I'll just borrow a few notes from petty cash until Monday.....

ok_by_meok_by_meover 8 years ago

Drmaxc has been writing unbelievable, whimsical pieces for years. I quite enjoy them. Seriously, when have you ever met a person who could stop time? If you are capable of accepting that premise, why would anything else bother you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It was nice to read a story where the main character didn't have a 12" cock and the ability to

Have a erection that lasts all day and able to cum 2 or 3 cups each orgasm.

Sadly, your story was so unbelievable I ended up skimming through it. Believe me, you lose your swimsuit and you'll notice it and for it to suddenly vanish would elicit screams of terror because no one knows what happened and imagine the young lady who found herself in the men's change room not once but twice...that would be terrifying and you can bet the lifeguards would be involved and the second time they would be reviewing security cams...get the picture? A woman disappearing and then suddenly reappearing with no explanation of how???

Lastly, how do you differentiate between an underage teenager and an 18 yr old in a swimming pool with no way to determine if they are of legal age? Which is an odd thought because If you are willing to rape (and that's what non consensual sex is) then why stop there? At this point, you have terrorized numerous young women, raped countless women, all of a sudden you find out that the teenager you fucked was actually 14...well...shit happens right? So the whole pool event, while humorous to you, leaves a foul taste in my mouth with the potential of unintended consequences. Consequences you should be thinking of.

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