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All Comments on 'Tina's Torpedoes Ch. 02: The Lesson'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Proofreading fail

"...slightly longer that he index finger." Could you fix this please?

Thanks for sharing,

JP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Reality check

So in the first chapter Sarah thinks sucking cock is disgusting and claims she never has, but now she is comparing the 2 cocks in her mouth??????? And suddenly she is deepthroating an unrealistic sized cock? wtf. Poetic licence is one thing but continuity is important to be credible.

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