All Comments on 'To Be Of Service'

thanks for the offering.

Only you can turn a cuck tale into a work of art. Great job Brit.

Five Stars

can be Pygmallion or Eliza D. TK U MLJ LV NV

IMHO. Sorry, you've done much better...

IMHO. You've done much better....

It was over before it started.

Where were the next pages? If you are going to write a story the least you could do is finish it. *

Nice turn!

What fun! Thanks for sharing

I enjoyed to bit of misdirection--the visualizing of Juliette as James' wife until the revelation at the end. The way it ended there are still ways it could be continued. Yes, very clever.

Good story. It had me thrown as to just whose wife she was. I just love the ending. Would have called it great if a little longer and I must say, I usually like my smut just a bit smuttier. Good work!

I get the feeling that some people only accept three page stories with an introduction and epilogue. This was a pleasure to read!

I don't like stories about wimps being cuckolded, but I read it anyway!

Sure glad I did, one of your best yet. Very complete short story, without feeling like an incomplete "Flash" story.

Another good story from you...short and to the point...4*

Didn't vote.

For sharing

a lot of people didn't read this to the end--hence the low score. This was a great little story and warrants a much higher score.

Great Job.

... but not a satisfying one for me, which probably says more about me than the story.

really ... I was unable any of this

Congratulations. This is worthy of publication just about anywhere, including in one of those snooty little literary journals. By this observation, I intend only the highest regard for your story while sarcastically demeaning readers who don't know perfumed crap from truffles.

It was a bit above your intelligence level I fear. I'll try to do a simple one for you. 'Once upon a time' ….. You get the message?

as he does bitching about others, he have a 100 stories on here! I think he

s dear annony's bastard love child

A thorn in the side indeed, but if I'm being honest, then I would miss Harry . Stupid I know, but we all have our soft side.

would have made a great longer story.

5* easy. Your surface talent is remarkable. If you ever went deeper into yourself than the tip of the proverbial iceberg, then heaven help us!

AQAP,,,,,its over, TK U MLJ LV NV

Another humorous, but imaginative, offering. You, sir, are good.

Some enjoyable British humor for a change. Good little story.

Great little humorous story.

Another nice little Britease twist and a good story.

why marry her?

Shit story 💩💩💩💩💩. No man would allow 2 guys enter his car and home to fuck his wife. 🖕

Your comment proves you are an idiot who didn't read the story, or more likely, who can't comprehend what he reads. The man the wife showed so much disrespect for at the beginning was the husband's chauffeur/body guard and was simply performing his assigned task to achieve the husband's divorce from the woman.

I Agree with you, demander. To bad he didn't have the guts to give us a name. These fools are scattered thru-out these stories. To Britease, good job. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

At the anonymous poster who blubbered that another commenter did not give a name:

ROARS WITH LAUGHTER!

Nice set up.

Clever set up. Nice twist.