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Stop, she doesn't want this. You've done enough damage. You've frightened her to the point of submission. If we stop now, then maybe we can build a bit of trust and move forward from there. He heard the reason in the back of his mind and shrugged it off. He was headed for pleasure, dominance, and ownership it was everything the monster had ever desired. It was time to make this girl hold up her end of the bargain.
"Alright, girl. Let's hear it. Tell me how much you want it."
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: I am currently studying for final examinations next week and will not be writing. However, I should be able to crank out the rest of this story relatively quickly over the summer months. So look back for the next update at the end of May. Thank you all so much for sticking with the story and please please please leave me your thoughts/opinions below. It is the highlight of my day reading what you all have to say, good and bad! And a huge thank you goes out to LaGrish for all of her hard work polishing and correcting my errors and oversights! Oh, and please leave a comment...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoSad that the author hasn't posted in anything since ch7. Amazing story with an interruptus-like ending. Sometimes miracles happen and authors return after years - Yes, please do!
Would have loved to read this story complete its story arch. What about Jake, Marie and Chassy - won't they miss her? Will Jake come to the farm for another purchase negotiation and recognize Bud, the mutt?
Rayah9 months agoGetting to the end of this story and discovering that it was posted 7 years ago is such a huge disappointment co sidering the amount of effort gone in to developing the characters and really thinking through exactly how the author whats the narrative of the story to go. I am really really hoping, somewhere out there is the rest of this story. Hope the author/poster is well and something sinister hasn't happened to them.
MissedLifeabout 1 year agoIt is such a shame this was never finished. Each character has been richly developed. Some of the best stories go unfinished. My hope as always is that you are healthy and just caught up in life. It beats the other possibilities. Maybe someday you will come back. Seven years is a long time to be MIA.
Anonymousover 5 years agoIt’s been years but if you are still kicking, please continue this story.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI was intrigued by your story as unlike most, you have done an excellent job with the characters development and evolution. While Chad seems unstable and at times almost evil on the outside, his battle with his internal “monster” as well as the knowledge and statement that he would never harm an animal shows the reader he is Redeamable. Further, he is a natural Dominant, he just doesn’t understand why or how to control it for lack of guidance. All people evolve sexually over their lifetime, but for those evolving beyond the vanilla, urges can be confusing and often develop into the internal battle you describe
Now to the story: Lindsey has just been force fed, frightened her dog will be killed and is now hanging from ropes in a barn. Physically, Her adrenaline and blood pressure have spiked. The next scene is obvious. She is going to throw up. Preferable all over Chad. That should give him enough time to think it through, fight back the monster and try a gentler approach. For Lindsey (and the reader) to root for Chad (for lack of a better word) Lindsey needs to see a gentler side of him.
Again, you are an excellent story teller. Consider getting a literary agent, and try reading author “Elle Kennedy” aka “Leanne Kennedy”
And please continue writing their story....
