All Comments on 'To Freeze Fire Ch. 04'

I want Michael to realise what a mistake he is doing and that they will get each other=)=)=)=D

LOVED this chapter... but I HATE waiting so long for the next part... he needs to hear why is a mistake taking her back... and WE all need to find out who that elderly man is and how did he managed to get a hold on her in the first place... if she is virgin then he never actually touched her so why she hates him so much, too many questions there.

Thank you all for keeping up with the story :) I apologies for the delay between the chapters. I work two full time jobs and finding time to write about can unfortunately be a real bear :(. I'm going to probably release a revised chapter in the next couple of days, in addition to a new chapter. Thank you CalyPy for your constructive criticism! You pointed out a few flaws I didn't realize I had made, and in the revised edition, i will be making changes so it makes more sense. Thank you all for reading once more!

--Luna XOXO

Continue writing I enjoyed the story.

Yet another who uses 'little one', turns me off.