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by LunaMacintrye

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cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 8 years ago
Your story is so good.

The only things holding you back are the update speed and your spelling and grammar. Skills are advanced, not advance. And it's a moot, not mote point.

It seems like you're back properly now, with a few chapters in a few days. I hope you are going to finish this time and do the story justice.

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