All Comments on 'To his Knees: The Beginning'

I am looking forward to seeing more of your writing as this seems to be a good start, my only complaint is the shortness of the work itself.

Please continue to evolve this world and it's denizens.

4/5

Please continue writing. You have cast the bait well and I'm definitely inerested but the brevity makes me fear that I shall be reading a lot of too short chapters as things develop.

Well written, too.

But it ended before anything erotic happened.

Worth writing more.

Good thing I check the comments first!