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Anonymousover 8 years agoEven for a fictional sci/fi story this was difficult to read.
Not sure what to say other than the writing simply couldn't hold my interest. Lacking cleverness with poor dialogue I just didn't like it.
BenevolentDCCalmost 8 years agocritics
loved it. yes, the writing lacked subtlety, but what the hell does that have to do with it? you have a story to tell, if it entertains, it was successful. keep it up.
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