All Comments on 'To Meet my Master'

It would have been much better, however, if you had used capitals and punctuation. As it stands, it is not an easy story to read, and it deserves better presentation.

Please keep writing and submitting your work -- it is the only way to improve. Welcome to Literotica, collaredandloved, and please have three stars.

collaredandloved, you have written a good first story, and I hope you are continuing to write even if you are not posting to Literotica.