All Comments on 'To Save a Life'

I LOVE the new ending. (It helps that the English classes were reading Romeo and Juliet the last couple weeks.)

Clever use of the song. The modern R & J is brilliant!

I really dig the new ending. Very cool!

A most excellent revision and new ending. LOVED it!

Crappy ending, but I say the same about Shakespeare'a story. The world is full of sad stories and heartbreak. I'm just going to pretend that they got away and lived happily ever after.

Up until the end, this story was predictable.

Then you gave us a "Romeo and Juliet" ending. Lame

A little trite all the way through - then a REAL trite ending!

The most lame story I have read on Lit.