All Comments on 'To Tame a Slave Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

hope you update soon and keep her strong

NthusiasticallyNthusiasticallyover 8 years ago
Thrilled to Have You Back

So glad you haven't abandoned this promising series as happens too frequently on this site. I'm really enjoying the balance Anthony is displaying. He feels secure enough to be lenient & amused by Alanna's strength rather than threatened. Thank you for allowing her some self-control, not crumbling into a weak, begging wimp.

Prince_of_ThievesPrince_of_Thievesover 8 years ago
Stayed true to characters

Thanks for letting the Characters develop at their own pace, looking forward to the next installment !

HandsOnMasterHandsOnMasterover 8 years ago
Excellent Insight

You have well captured a self-possessed Dominate. It is about causing the submissive to (semi) willingly give up control so that she receives what she craves from someone with the power and will to impress it upon her. Bravo.

Curious_Cuddly_KittenCurious_Cuddly_Kittenover 8 years ago
Let me be your muse

Please keep writing I really like this and I rarely comment so yeah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep up the good work

This story is wonderful and I hope you keep up the good work dude! 😸

karalinekaralineover 8 years ago
good work

I'm loving it so far, looking forward to the next chapters.

ScotchnSodaScotchnSodaover 8 years ago
Great work

all 5 chapters are well worth the effort. I look forward to #6

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5 stars!!

Thank you for this delicious story, i've thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. keep up the good work!! 👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Awesome!! Can't wait for more!!

VrianaVrianaover 8 years ago

<3 loved it!!! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
yer weeks up!

very good. I enjoy your story very much. xoEDFB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

But...angels are queer. They prefer men. Do you even get girl angels except for in american movies? I promise you - queer as fuck.

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago

Great continuation of the story. You characters are so easy to fall in love with! Thanks!

xx

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 6 years ago
Sleep

She does sleep an awful lot, doesn't she? But I guess it is a way to process your life being turned around. Beautiful story, thank you.

Babsy830Babsy8303 months ago

I’m melting

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