To Tame a Slave Ch. 09

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He nodded, his face impassive. "You are correct."

Taking a deep breath, I asked. "Would you like to help me solve mine?"

A slow smile spread across his face. "Absolutely."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please finish! We as readers forgive plot holes and just want more! I have been checking every few months for years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving this story. I love your writing. Please don't quit! Look at all of us who have loved the chapters as they are. We don't care about any holes in plots. We just want more!

4u2_nv4u2_nvover 2 years ago

A muse is a fickle thing... sometimes you gotta start somewhere and force those creative juices to squeeze. Maybe even just outline what you do know you want the characters to grow into, and that might help you start finishing this! Cuz we are anxiously awaiting what's up with this dark elf's moodiness, Is Anthony a reformed bad guy? If you've got some time, just sit and brainstorm an outline - or write one random upcoming scene that you're sure of. Start anywhere and maybe more will follow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Pleaseee give us an ending 😭

Been waiting patiently but not sure if you’re forever gone :(

redhot_icecoldredhot_icecoldabout 3 years ago
Please don't leave us all hanging too much longer, your talent is too good to waste!

I have finally finished reading the last chapter, and I already want more. I can't even begin to imagine how long the wait must feel for your readers who read Chapter 9 when you first posted it. I just have to keep the faith that you will come back to this story when you're ready. I'm sure it'll be worth the wait. Hands down the best erotica I've ever read. Fantastic character development, plot teasers and dream scenes. You have created a huge world, with so much to explore, and all of it worth exploring. I will be gutted if this story never has an ending, but also it would so tragic to push it or rush it. I would be happier if it was never resolved. Thank you for all your hard work and effort so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
PLEASE FINISH

Just came across this and WHY IS THERE NO END. To the author: your comment gives me hope that you might finish this and PLEASE do. Alanna is a bad ass and I love her - part of me wants her to find a way home and say, "screw Drell and Anthony." But at the same time, I'm 100% team Drell. I feel like I should hate him, I mean he did put her in the slave camp for A WEEK and dude has not made up for that. Not too mention I kept thinking there was no way he'd go through selling her and then he did which mildly broke my heart, AND now all the hot and cold shit? UGH. I'm hoping that he has to go through some form of hell in order to be worthy of our Alanna again. But also, I can't help myself and I am rooting for Drell. I just canNOT get on board with Anthony. I have no problem with his relationship with the previous girl, but his relationship with Alanna kinda makes me want to murder him. Probably because I adore Alanna and their relationship felt so uneven and manipulative that it just wasn't a safe environment for her. It was too unbalanced. I think at least with Drell, she has some power and a girl needs some power. P.S. the moment when she willingly gives up that power to Drell back in ch. 8 and lets him bite her and submits, I mean that moment was powerful because it was such an act of instinctive trust. I just wish Drell had actually respected that. Anyways, please finish, because I desperately want to know how it ends. I'm a sucker for good fantasy romance. Okay, this is long and enough for now. Scuse me while I go spend the next ten hours rereading and obsessing over the best parts of this ;)

ObviousNoodleObviousNoodleabout 3 years ago
PLEASE finish the story

I came across this and I have to know how it ends!!

It is easily my favorite on this site so far. Don't forget about your fans!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This story gives me life!

I love the humor, emotion, and passion you wrap up and present in the packaging of well-crafted characters and evocative writing. I just found your story again after three years or so, and I’m still in love with it. I can’t wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My dude, I gotta know

I keep checking back! These characters deserve their time in the sun, and I know you'll give it to them!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So excited for the next chapter!

This is such a great story! You’re really talented! So happy you’ve decided to keep going <3

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