All Comments on 'Together for the Holidays Ch. 02'

Hope we can get to read where they do get together

Wait! Hot story, even hotter scene. Hope they do eventually get together. But now you HAVE to continue the story! That bit about not pulling the trigger... WHAT!?

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

I like this story and I like the way Rally is setting this up. I am hoping that he will continue with chapter 3. There are some big decision points coming up for the characters, Terry and Trisha. And I want to see how Rally handles this.

Let me say this: If someone is reading so they can complain, that is very childish and your opinion is not be taken seriously by anyone. Simply stop reading and spend your time on a story you do like.

This is getting very good. I hope you keep writing this tale.

Don't write any more

Please carry on with this storyline.. I can see several directions it can take and I'm intrigued to see which way you'll go.

Ignore the "anonymous" haters with nothing constructive to say.. I tend to ignore most comments written by people who don't have the balls to comments as themselves and hide behind a veil of anonymity.

Pleaseeee keep this going

Waited for some time for this chapter just wish it was longer, hope you can get the next out a lot sooner we'll be looking out for it.

I read for pleasure not to be depressed.

Did Terry try to commit suicide?

His girlfriend did.

Please add one more chapter and finish this story.

Jesus, that was amazing.

But you can't just end it there. For the love of God please do atleast one more chapter and give us the resoultion for these characters.

PS: This the first comment I have ever left on this site. The story was that good.

Got to say loving this story. It was obvious to me when he talked about his girlfriend that the support group was a suicide support group. Terryis is obviously a shy introvert with depression and suicidal tendencies and his sister is an extroverted dominant personality with problems of her own. There are a lot of questions that need answered. I hope they are in ch.3. One note for the Author look into an editor there are many mistakes that distracted me... will instead of with, it instead of is, and others. Just making sure words are spelled right is not enough especially when the story is this good. Thanks

terry was a total wimp...