All Comments on 'Tommy is Grown Up Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Awesome!

Shit man, don't stop now! Keep it coming, just starting to get good! ; P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
keep it cumming....

I love the way this is going....keep them cumming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
not a big fan of 'multiple' page stories....

... and even though I'd like to see it in one multi pager... I'll wait for the story to develop/pass.. so far so good

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Awesome keep the story going

Tommy needs some of the teen hirls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

each chapter should be 2-3 pages long. these 3 chapters of yours are really a part of what should be one chapter. Please keep them coming but make the chapters longer.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStonealmost 7 years ago
The chapter description is messed up

Dad isn't featured in this chapter, neither are any of Tommy's peers. Is this another story where Lesbian Sex is a given, but the men will totally ignore each other sexually? Because I'm hoping for a chapter where Tommy and his Dad double-team Nicholas!

rodavrodavalmost 7 years ago

Please, don't let this be mixed with gay encounters as one of the comments wants it. Just go to the gay section.

Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettalmost 7 years ago
Not really a chapter.

This really could have been added at the end of the previous chapter, and the description does need to be amended to be correct, or re-upload with the full thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Grant Lee ...dead on!!

Grant..you are so right. Let's mix it up!! MM and FF....MMF....FFM....whatever

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
chapter 3

Had nothing to do with tommy and dad with one of tommy's pers. It only was tommy and his mom what happen to the rest of the story sir don't get me wrong it was good but when she said she fucked nicholas that was a little slap in tommy's face Ihe was about to feel worthless nothing mom fucked Adunis

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 2 years ago

Would like to see this story develop into a series.

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