All Comments on 'Tommy, New House, & New Mom Ch. 02'

Like the story, keep it coming. Thanks

You are doing this in such small parts, yet to have any incest, categorizing it as incest, and gone up to 4 days between parts. My advice is same to the email I just sent, post the story as a whole. Stop posting chunks for going days with the next part, and it's so small it's not only irritating you already lost my interest for the last part was days ago.

great story line so far only prob. i see is how short the chapters are

hi thank you for your work do keep it up

so far so good

well written but the story is sluggish, not much going on.