All Comments on 'Tommy, New House, & New Mom Ch. 04'

looking forward to her finding out that her son is aware of her sluttish behaviour. looking forward to him taking control of the bitch. things will be better once he has established ownership of the whore.

I csnt wait to read more to see what kind of control Tommy takes over both his mother and his family tradition keep up the good work :-)

I need more please.

New chapter coming?

cant wait for this story yo continue

We hope that this story continues

Don't keep us waiting.

more

would love to see more of the story of tommie and the new house and what tommie is going to do to his sister and mother. it sounds like tommie is going to be takeing charch of his family

one page at a time, none of them remotely related, none worth reading. btw, what ever happened to "new mom"?

I quit.

I love the suspense.I hoe that you continue with this story.

It would be nice if you finished it. Thank you for writing.

please keep em coming

Cleat this author ran out of steam. So many threads in the story started but were never followed. What was on the note she gave to the movers? What weird shit was on the rest of the video tapes? What happened between young Ann and Tommy's grandmother? Did his grandfather ever get in on that action?

This story is an example of so much lost potential. Too bad. 😒