All Comments on 'Tommy the Milker Ch. 07'

Ahh this got me so hot & then it just ended! Please don't make us wait long to see what Uncle Ralph will do with our sweet innocent little boy!

While the story may be great there are too many grammatical and spelling errors in your text. Just in the first five lines I stumbled over 8 mistakes.

And while everyone makes a mistake now and then, these are just too many and they seriously impact the readability of your text. Please, have someone proofread your text. You would do your readers a great favour.